高中英语作文模板观点对比和今昔对比

大庆铁人中学高三专项复习写作（五）观点对比和今昔对比

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1. The reasons for this can be listed as follows.

原因如下

2. Its advantages can be listed as follows.// it has the following advantages.它有如下优点。

3. It benefits us quite a lot.// It is of great benefit to us. // We can benefit greatly from it.

对我们很有益。

4. It brings more harm than good to us. 它带来的坏处大于好处。

Step1 作文模版

had a discussion about whether .1 Opinions are divided on this issue.2 of the students think should .3

.What’s more, .4

On the other hand, of the students think shouldn’t

.5What’s worse, .6

In short, have not arrived at any agreement yet.7

模板说明

开头

(1)We had a discussion about whether students should be allowed to…

(2)We’ve had a survey on whether students should be allowed to… ．

(3)I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about whether students should be allowed to…

过渡句

(1)Opinions are divided on this issue．

(2)Opinions are mainly divided into two groups．

(3)Different people，however，have different opinions on this matter．

(4)Different people，however，think quite differently on this matter．

③介绍正方观点

(1)Sixty percent of the students are for the idea。

(2)Sixty percent of the students think it necessary to… ’

(3)Some people think that…According to them‘，all of us should…

(4)Some believe that…

(5)They are of the opinion that…

⑤介绍反方观点。

(1)However，…of the students think…

(2)On the other hand，…of the students think…

(3)However，others have different opinions．．

(4)But…of the students think…

(5)Others argue that…In their opinion，…

⑥进一步介绍反方的理由

(1)What’s worse，… (2)What’s more，……

(3)In addition，…

(4)Besides，．．． (5)Plus，… (6)First,…Second，…Third，．．．

⑦总结句

(1)In short，no agreement has been reached yet,

(2)So far，no agreement has been reached

(3)In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet．

Step2 真题例析

假如你是李华，你校高三同学正在开展一场讨论，讨论的主题是：高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼？请根据下表所提供的信息，给某英文报社写一封信，介绍—下讨论的情况。

注意：1．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数；

2．字数：100左右。

Dear Editor，

I'm writing to tell you about a discussion we’ve had about whether students of senior 3 should take physical exercise．There are two opinions on this issue．

55％of the students think they should take exercise every day，such as doing morning exercises, playing table tennis and playing basketball，but it shouldn’t take too much time．For another thing，exercise builds up their bodies and reduces diseases．For another，sports let their brains have a rest so that their revision will be more effective．

On the other hand，45％of the students believe taking exercise is a waste of time．After having sports，they are much too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons．What’s worse，it’s also possible to get hurt in sports．

So，no agreement has been reached．I'm looking forward to your reply．

Yours truly．

Li Hua

练习一

你班同学参加了《21世纪中学生英文报》组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：城市内是否可以养宠物(狗和猫)。请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社投稿，介绍讨论情况，并说明自己的观点和建议

注意：1．信的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2．字数100左右。

Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities.

今昔对比类

作文模板

.1Take for example.2In the past, ,but now ,Once ,but no linger now. What's more, is different. .3In short, .4

模板说明

1、 提出论点或观点

2、 今昔对比

3、 总结句

真题

假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据表格提供的信息写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。

注意:1、字数100左右；

2、开头已为你写好；

3、生词：减轻学习负担（reduce learning load）

Dear Dick,

How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in schools in China? In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I don't know about others, but I used to have to work even on weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well.

Now I have more free time. I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. What's more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

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