范文： My Earth Hour 2011 The Earth Hour was from 8:30 pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year. I was sorry that I didn’t pay enough attention to the day. ①That day, I was hanging out with my best friend Li Ping at the street when we heard something about it. ②As a teenager, I usually do something to protect our environment. I never throw about some litter. ④And I usually turn off the lights⑤when I don’t use them. And I often use both sides of paper⑥. I hope everyone will take part in Earth Hour2012.⑦ I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in. 范文点评： ①作者用sorry 表达了自己没有参加今年的“地球一小时”活动的遗憾心情。完成了第一个点的内容。这里pay attention to 运用得很好。 ②用过去进行时态的when引导的时间状语从句描述了当时自己与好友在街上溜达。完成了第二点内容。这里hang out 的运用很好。③本句作为过渡句，引出下文自己保护环境的一些行为。 ④never throw about some litter是自己做的有利于环保的一件事情。throw about 的使用很好。 ⑤turn off the lights是自己做的有利于环保的另一件事情。turn off的使用很好。⑥use both sides of paper 是自己做的有利于环保的又一件事情。以上三句完成了第三点内容。Both sides 运用得很好。⑦用I hope 号召人们参加“2012年地球一小时”活动。take part in 使用得当。
【2011广东广州】 书面表达（本题15分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。 最近，你班就“你的理想职业”展开了一次调查。下表是你们小组的情况请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。组员Mary Kate Mike Tom 你 理想职业 时装设计师(fashion designer 园艺工(gardener 作家 厨师？ 原因 喜欢漂亮衣服，擅长绘画喜爱植物，想让城市更美 愿意与别人分享精彩故事 为别人煮健康美味的食物？ 注意：1.词数80左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数; 2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 范文： Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideals. Mary is going to be a fashion designer when she grows up. She loves beautiful clothes, and she does well in drawing.①Kate loves plants, so she is going to be a gardener. Her aim is to make our city more beautiful.②Mike would love sharing③wonderful stories with others, so he is going to be a writer. Tom wants to be a cook. He is good at cooking healthy and delicious food. I want to be a teacher in the future because I love children very much.④ Hopefully everyone can realize dreams in the future. 范文点评： ①此处作者写Mary 的理想职业及原因。此处when 引导的时间转语从句运用准确。短语grow up, do well in运用得体。 ②此处作者写Kate 的理想职业及原因。此处不定式作表语运用准确，make…+比较级用得好。 ③此处存在错误：would love 的后面应该接不定式。Sharing应该改为to share。④此处作者写自己的理想职业和原因。此处because 引导的原因状语从句运用准确，增强了问掌柜的写读性。
