出国留学ps 个人陈述写作注意事项 PS肯定是自己先写，然后找同学或者老师帮忙改最好.因为面试的时候，有的老师会有针对性地问，如果PS写得好，也必须结合出众的Resume和面试表现辅助。 1. 什么样的PS可以算在中国学生里面比较outstanding? 凸显你的特别之处，你的优势, convince admission committee why you fit for this program, and why they have to choose you over other applicants 当然无论如何出众，必须是和program 录取要求相关有联系的 就像高考老师批作文一样，读了很多前篇一律夸自己的PS,突然眼前这一篇很不一样，能打动人心，就高分了。 上面的那个链接就有Writing the Personal Statement: Top 10 Rules Strive for depth rather than breadth. Narrow focus to one or two key themes, ideas or experiences Try to tell the reader something that no other applicant will be able to say Provide the reader with insight into what drives you Be yourself, not the 'ideal' applicant Get creative and imaginative in the opening remarks, but make sure it's something that no one else could write Address the school's unique features that interest you Focus on the affirmative in the personal statement; consider an addendum to explain deficiencies or blemishes (可以借PS的大好机会，解释你的GPA，解释你的弱点转化优势等等 Evaluate experiences, rather than describe them (嗯，这个真的很重要每个人的经历都是不同的，如果你一开始动笔就参照网上的各种sample如何凸显自己呢?厚积而薄发，好好审视自己的过去，动机，其实国际生还是有很多优势的，特别是申请私立学校，只需要AD的情况下。 2. PS里对所申专业(项目和小方向的理解应该占到多少篇幅呢? 和小方向的理解可以考虑PS和Resume互补结合(Resume 上不要写那些不相关的经历，即使你自己认为比较“牛”，小方向的理解部分教授们一看就知道你在什么层次。 3.是否应该写明感兴趣的faculty member呢? 你确定这个faculty member有funding给你吗? 还有，他/她在program的admission committee里吗?当然，admission committee是由系里大部分的full time faculty member组成。Either way, it won't hurt you to do that, as long as the info you provide in your personal statement is relevant/helpful to prove your point. 原文地址：http://www.08lx.com/instrument/20150716160.html留学文书：http://www.08lx.com/instrument/
