英语读后续写练习及范文(一
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ilookedoutatthesmilingfacespackedintotheschoolhall.Flashesfromcameraslitupinalldirections.Theapplause(掌声filledmyears.Ihaddoneit.Ihadreallydoneit.
Justafewmonthsearlier,Iwouldneverhavepicturedmyselfactinginaplayinfrontoftwohundredpeople."Notforamilliondollars,"Iwouldhavesaid.Butwhenthetimecame,Igotuponstageandfacedoneofmygreatestfears—anddiscoveredIcoulddomorethanIevergavemyselfcredit(认可for.Ifoundanewpersoninsideme,amuchmoredaring,outgoingpersonwhohadbeenhiddenallalong,justwaitingfortheopportunitytoappear.
Ifnotformyteacher,Mrs.Sather,Imightneverhavefoundthatopportunity.
Inthefirstandsecondgrade,Iwasextremelyshy.Ihadfriends,butitjustwasn'tinmypersonalitytobeveryoutgoing,evenwhenIknewsomeonewell.IwasafraidIwoulddoorsaysomethingwrong,sousuallyIjustsmiledandlistenedtootherpeople'sconversations.IdidwellinschoolandIlovedtowrite.However,Iwouldescapeintomywriting,whereIcouldbemyselfandneverhadtoworryaboutwhatotherpeoplethoughtofme.Inmystories,Iwasnevershy.
Myteacher,Mrs.Sather,alwaysencouragedmetowritemore.Shetoldourclasstogoafterourdreamsanddiginwithbothhands.Ithinkshewasoneofthefirstpeopletoseemyinnerstrength.Oneday,sheannouncedthatourclasswasgoingtoperformaplayshehadwritten."I'llbegintocast(挑选演员everyonetomorrow,"shesaid."IneedsomeonewhoisnotafraidtobeonstageinfrontofalotofpeopletoplaytheleadpartofDorothy.Anybodywanttotry?"Afewexcitedhandsshotup—mine,ofcourse,wasnotoneofthem—andMrs.Sathersmiled."We'lltalkmoreaboutittomorrow,"shesaid.Thenthebellrangandmyclassmatesslowlylefttheclassroom.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左石：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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WhenIwasloadingupmybackpack,Mrs.Satheraskedmetogotoher.
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HearingMrs.Sather'swords,Irealizeditwastimetomakeachange.
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所给文章分析：
这篇作文用了倒叙手法，作者回忆了自己在老师鼓励下参加戏剧表演的过程。续写第一段应该写老师对她的鼓励，鼓励的内容要和上文所给信息呼应，比如说老师从她的writing中知道她的innerstrength，还要写出作者的不自信，有语轮转换，别老师一直说到底。第二段建议先写作者第二天毛遂自荐接受了这个挑战，呼应最后一段老师说talkmoreaboutittomorrow，然后写作者的准备过程。最后结束回忆，回到现实，呼应第一段，可以重复一下克服胆怯的激动，写写对老师的感激，或者煽情一下——泪眼婆娑中看到老师站在人群中向她伸大拇指。
写作建议：
1.仔细阅读原文，找出：
主要角色：本文应该是作者I和老师Mrs.Sather。• 