The two maps illustrate the planned changes of a university’s sports center based on its current conditions. 第二段:按照箭头的指向,先描述入口区域的变化,从变大最大的部分开始着手进而写到小变化。
First, the entrance hall and the reception area will be expanded, with a sports shop and a caféin the west and east corners. However, the central area of the premises will not change enormously, except that the gym will be extended eastward. The 25-meter swimming pool, the changing room and the seating space will remain the way they are. 第三段:由入口区域转向至东西方向的区域,承接上一段的思路,先写大变化后写小变化,期间可以通过一些连接词,给考官反映出写作逻辑顺序。
Immense changes will happen to the outdoor courts that are now independent of the central area. Replacing the west court, a leisure pool and a changing room on its south will be built. The east court will also be removed, and where it is now, there will be a number of facilities. First, a sizeable sports hall will share the wall with the seating area of the 25-meter pool. Second, directly opposite the sports hall, there will be a pair of dance studios. In addition, a changing room, closely adjacent to the café, will be built in the southeast corner. 第四段:固定操作部分:描述变化的幅度以及变化后的突出特点。
Overall, the sports center will have greater versatility. (183 words 回顾剑13权威解读